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Hikaris Story, Life of a Fox Girl Part 1

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Published: Aug 31, 2012

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I am from Germany and use because of inadequate knowledge of English to write, so please Google about possible spelling errors ignore because even Google is not perfect.

It was a sunny and warm morning, the birds are chirping and a gentle breeze blew across the surrounding fields of the small town.
John, a 15 year old high school student had left the school just now, as so often endure.
He was anything but popular, daily teased the other him just because he had an overweight, had ihiren eyes to good grades so that he was a 'nerd' was and so the more popular just because of good grades was the teachers.
He was nothing of all that he was not the sportiest, so he took off never to his parents were scientists, they took him to be trimmed well in school from an early age to do so.
For this purpose, he was also an only child and his parents had to do in their spare nothing better than to give him even the afternoon lessons, which he had at two astro physicists as a teacher better grades in high school there was actually clear.
He ran straight at the city park along, his parents would come back home until the evening so he could take his time.
The worst part was how he found his parents thought he should focus on the school and the learning, not on things like sports, they meant it rich when he ran out of high school to go home so he stayed fit.
The only people he could call friends a couple of people with whom he spoke were in Internet chat rooms, who did not know him personally, but did not see him judged him by his behavior and that he was much better than this superficial thinking of the other.
Then there was the little interested him the science, rather, he read fantasy novels or manga, which were as gateways to other worlds, worlds of adventure and there were even people like him to do much, those who were not very fit but other qualities had.
He sighed, but would not like a character of an anime or manga suddenly discover any special powers, or a partner who helped him get in Digimon, no, he was doomed to be the fat nerd.
It surprised him even more when he came by to a statue which represented a fox, almost like the Inari statues in Japan.

"Do you have a wish young man?"

He heard a woman's voice say behind him and when he turned behind him was a beautiful woman. This looked kinda Asian, had long white hair and was wearing a sort to the yukata were shown in white on which foxes.
Above all, he knew one thing: She looked like he Inari, the fox goddess was introduced from Japan, it even looked like the picture which he painted once for fun.
He Swallowed easy, he knew many legends about gods, people simply turned and well, even if his parents were scientists, he himself believed in such things and were a bit too many coincidences at once. Only the Inari statue here in the park, then the Mysterious woman who looked like a picture he had painted of Inari and then she asked him if he still had one wish.
John was not sure why but he felt he should respond to the woman, telling her what he wanted.

"Well yes Miss, I, well ..."

Stammered he was unsure because he knows what could be if he was right.
The woman, however, smiled warmly and interrupted his stutter quiet.

"You do not have to say a young man, I know it, too. You're unhappy with your life, your existence as the One who you are, I'm not right?"

He was a little scared when she said this, but she was right, from wherever she knew it, he was unhappy to be with John.
He looked down and then nodded slightly, denying was useless because he was sure that he was facing here Inari, she had probably taken up this form so that he recognized her or anything, really funny that he did not know with the same certainty.
The woman was now up to him and gave him a little something in his hand before she turned and disappeared among the trees.
Unsure he saw the object to which they had given him, it was a small amulet with a fox on the Pendant, he swallowed what would happen if he put the chain? When he thought of all the stories which are then turned transformations was a small chain actually very suspicious.
He decided on to take the chain, later he was still thinking about what he would do with it.

With a Plauen feeling in the stomach, he came home and made first homework happen no matter what happened, his parents would shoot him literally to the moon if he is doing something else occupied before the homework done, had another thing for which he was teased, he never forgot the homework.
Even when he was ready and engaged in an online game, the chain wanted him not to go out of his head, even cartoons, anime and its manga booklet did not help him in this.
Finally he gave up at four clock 20, on the one hand to his late parents, on the other hand he wanted to finally know what was the chain.
With trembling hands, he now this pendant in hand and bit his lower lip, he was really nervous and curious about what to do but this chain would when he raised it.
Finally he overcame, and did it, he laid out the chain and that he hardly heard the clicking of the shutter and the pendant already glowed a strange feeling spread from his neck to his whole body.
Then began the really strange.
First, his ears began to be getting warmer, he felt like they grew but he had to push against the ground so as not to fall over the front so he could not touch her.
He also noticed that his ears are not two fluffy fox ears were. Next, began to disappear his entire body fat slowly so that his clothes were too big for him as a little fat but which remained in the buttocks area so wandered which now grew while other fat to his chest walked and made childish approaches of breasts.
According to John shrank now more and more, was childish. His brown hair was now before a little longer and colored a bright blond grew as his eyes.
His legs were too thin, female and smaller his nose, more like a little girl.
During his pants and underwear were already no longer properly began to grow from a foxtail from his tailbone to a fluffy, red fox tail completed the appearance of a girl with fox ears and fox tail.
When she opened her eyes again he had just closed that were now red instead of green as before, and as she looked at her hands she was invariably clear that this thing would have trouble.
A view down to her genital area revealed to the the 'manhood' had now given way to a more feminine gender.

"Uh oh, Mom and Dad are killing me."

Found it and was amazed at the childlike girl's voice, but this told her here except her sex had changed more than just her looks.
When she went into the bathroom to see if she was right after it was confirmed: She looked like a girl about nine years old, the breast growth had put on just her hair and handed her now until the shoulder blades.
As she now wanted to look for new clothes, she noticed a few things on the toilet seat, it was a note or something about the kind
She took the note in her little hands and read it by yourself:

"Dear John, I am glad that you accepted my gift, these things will surely fit you better than the rest in your house.
Unfortunately, I must advise you to turn on the news, there is bad news for you. "

Insecure she put back the message, bad news? That did not please her, and now her childlike mind got really scared at the thought of what this might mean.
To which the message was clear from Inari, or just the woman who had given her the pendant.
Insecure she ran into the living room and turned on the news channel to the next, she found.
There, images of an accident could be seen, there were ambulances and police.
"The news of the police has confirmed just now that the famous scientist Marry and Henry Lingsten died in the accident. A truck was frontally crashed into her car so that the driver and front passenger area was completely crushed. Early reports had the accident driver, a advised 33 year old trucker with 1.9 per thousand in the wrong lane of the highway and the car was so rammed. the driver is now threatening a charge of involuntary manslaughter and drunken driving. "
Reported the newsreader but John had not been listening when they told their parents were dead
Tears welled up in her eyes and she could think of nothing else, they were dead, their parents would never come home again, she would never yell at it she had this 'Humbuk' can do to themselves.

"I am alone ..."

She sobbed and just did not know what to do, where to go? Her parents were only children like her, she had no grandparents, and would you believe even if they still have that?
It was just so unfair, until she was always upset and now that it no longer would she lost her parents in return.
When it struck 20 clock they overcame fatigue, her body was that of a child, and she could not fight it after she had been crying for so long.
When she awoke again, it was just seven clock in the morning, she was surprised at first she lay on the floor but as memories came back broke back tears out of her.
Why had this happen to her? If karma was why it hit her? Someone she had never done anything bad happened to her was everything and yet you took the fate of their parents?
She pulled together so well it went, she had to now self-sufficient, she was already 15 years old, even if they did not look like they could provide them.
Cumbersome by the discouragement that she felt she went to the bathroom and washed her first, she felt somehow dirty and when it was dry weider she put on her new clothes.
These consisted initially of a panties in pink, like a child's bra, where she came from, but now was a mystery. This was to attract as difficult for them but she could with difficulty and hardship.
Next, there was a large sand-colored jacket and a black sweater that was probably because it was not cold it should not they can stay in the apartment. And she had a dark-blue pleated skirt which she went to about three inches above the knees.
As she pulled on the white stockings, she saw that her nails were a bit long and pointed.

/ / This is probably because I am partly a fox who indeed claws. / /

She thought, and thought no more about it.
After she pulled the socks still on his shoes and then had to find the she felt herself a little Asian, their whole appearance gave the impression she was in Japan she thought.

"Weird, but okay."

Found it and then went to eat something, just fried, nothing more. Remembered her as now she was able to not go to school, she was too young for the high school and she was not even registered.
With her breakfast, she sat down and ate only before she remembered something: how hot she wanted now?
A little unsure it remained the fork between the lips while she thought.

"I see from when I was in Japan, so it should be a Japanese name just what?"

She mused, looking around, hang up her look with a poster with the single Kanji was she knew from Japan: Hikari light.
A smile crept on her face, it was a sign? Perhaps because she had only paid attention to the characters and not the rest of the poster but that was unimportant, she had decided she would from now on Hikari.

This is a story that I once just written overnight, it will follow more chapters as I please be patient with everything Google Translate Translate to English, I'm from Germany.

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DBC67

Nov 29, 2016

It was a challenge to read it, however, I was able to follow the story. And that, I think, is the most important part of story telling. The rest just makes it interesting. Besides, a story is like a journey, it's not the start or the finish that make a good story. It's what happens in between that makes a good story. I'm going to read part two now.

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